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You sat watching your amazing Spanish husband as he tried to explain to Romano what you had just found out; you were 3 months pregnant with Antonio's (Spain) child and Romano was going to be a big brother.
"Madre (mother)!" Romano said running to you pouting. "That-a tomato loving idiota said you were going to have a baby!"
"Because I am silly," you said happily, but your smile faded when you noticed Romano wasn't crying happy tears. "What's wrong, Romano?"
"W- when you-a have the baby you won't want me anymore," he said trying to hold back his tears. "B-but I don't-a want you to get rid of me madre!"
"Now who told you I was going to get rid of you?" You asked shooting Toni a look, but he looked at you wide eyed and confused so you knew it wasn't him. "Romano listen. I love you and so does Toni, you're just going to be a big brother more that's all that's going to be different."
"Y- you mean you won't-a do like grandpa Rome and get rid of me?" He asked looking into your eyes.
"No, of course not. I love you my silly little man," you said kissing his forehead.
"Ti amo Madre (i love you mother)!" Romano said excitedly as he hugged you back.
"Now go get ready for bed," you said smiling at your tiny son.
"Will- a you come read me a story?" He asked and you nodded making him smile and jump up as he 'accidentally' knocked Toni over in his hast to get upstairs which only made you giggle and Toni shake his head as he rolled his beautiful green eyes.
You stood up after a moment and Toni pulled you into his arms giving you a soft kiss which still made your heart skip a few beats.
"Te amo mi amor (I love you my love)," Toni whispered in your ear making you giggle again.
"And I love you too," you whispered kissing his neck. "But I better go put Romano to bed before he comes and attacks you again."
"Ok amor," Toni said sighing. "Hurry back."
"Of course," you said smiling as you walked up stairs and into Romano's room where he was awaiting you as he held a book close to his chest. "What are we reading tonight, hm?"
"This one Madre, please," he said smiling as he handed you a book, The Very Hungary Caterpillar.
You smiled and began reading, Romano falling asleep in your lap before you finished. You kissed his forehead before you tucked him in and went to your room cuddling against your husband before you both drifted off to sleep.

***A few months later***

You sat nervously as you waited for the doctor to come back and tell you if you were going to have a little boy or a little girl. Toni had taken Romano to the bathroom, so you were alone for the moment. You sighed, Toni had said as long as it was healthy he didn't care, but you hoped for a little girl, sure you would take a little boy, but you just wanted Romano to have a sister instead of another brother.
"Mrs Carriedo," your doctor said as he walked in. "We need to talk, but maybe we should wait for your husband to come back first."
"What? Why?" You asked confused. "If you're just telling me if I'm having a girl or boy then why not just tell me now?"
"Well that's the thing... Mrs Carriedo... You're baby..." the doctor said not knowing how to say whatever it was he had to tell you.
"Oh just tell me, it can't be that bad," you said making him sigh.
"Well your babies umbilical cord somehow managed to suffocate your baby," he said looking at the floor.
"What?!" You managed to say as Toni and Romano walked back in.
"I'm very sorry, these things just happen sometimes and we don't know why, "he said not meeting your husband worried glance.
"What's going on chica?" Toni asked taking your hand in his.
"What did you do to my Madre?!" Romano yelled at the doctor.
"W-we l-lost the baby," you managed to whisper before your sobbing took over.
"Huh? Where's my baby sister?" Romano asked confused.
"Romano," you whispered through your tear filled eyes.
"Here l-let me tell him chica," Toni whispered knowing you couldn't talk.
"What's going on you tomato loving idiota?" Romano demanded as Toni picked him up and sat him on his lap. "Why is my Madre crying?!"
"Romano, you know about Heaven right?" Toni asked and Romano nodded. "Well that's where your baby sister went."
"What-a?! N-no! S-stop-a lying!" Romano yelled tears welling in his eyes.
"He's not lying," you managed to say before both Romano and Toni pulled you into a hug you all sobbing together for once not even Romano knowing what to say.
"Amor, we'll make it through this together," Toni whispered.
"S-si, we are a family," Romano said both of them making a half hearted smile appear on your lips as you pulled them closer, thinking to yourself how lucky you were to have them and how you didn't know what you would do without them... You just wished it wouldn't have taken this to finally bring you all together...
A random idea that came to me a while back and I'm just now writing it XD I don't own you or the hetalia characters. I can do a part 2 of you guys wish :) I hope you enjoy
Here's a link to part 2 [link] :)
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What would have been my second older sister and my first younger brother died like that... And my littlest bro ( i've got two) almost did too... He had to spend god knows how much time in the incubator with a tube in his nostrils... De feelz😢
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LunaGamerImInPortal Featured By Owner Sep 11, 2014  Student General Artist
rith in the feels man ;-;
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Mymaplesyrup Featured By Owner Aug 26, 2014  Student Traditional Artist
This effected me a lot more then normal because when I was a baby I had my umbilical cord wrapped around my neck and almost chocked me when I was born but it was a beautifully sad story.
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:iconhetaloidmass:
hetaloidmass Featured By Owner Aug 5, 2014
This was really cute and it was sad :D
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:iconinuashi86:
InuAshi86 Featured By Owner Jul 16, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
AHHHH WHY U DO DIS TO ME!!

THE FEEEEEELS
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:iconcrazzzychic:
crazzzychic Featured By Owner Jul 17, 2014
I'm sorry couldn't resist putting the feels in
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:iconthecrazytardis5:
Thecrazytardis5 Featured By Owner Aug 18, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
WHY U DO DIS!!!!!!!!!!
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:iconinuashi86:
InuAshi86 Featured By Owner Jul 28, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Pikachu Crying Plz 
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kawaiibunny4 Featured By Owner Jul 16, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
WHY NOW I AM CRY NOOOOOOO
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Megafangirl77 Featured By Owner Jul 12, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Agdgsgcgdgvcxcgdc. IM IN PAIN. FEEEELS. WILL SOME ONE JUST GIVE HIM A FUCKING YOUNGER SIBLING?! AHHHHH
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BlackNovaWolf Featured By Owner Jul 5, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
That's so sad. Great job on the story tho. I read this before I got a DA and I loved it ^^
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:iconcrazzzychic:
crazzzychic Featured By Owner Jul 6, 2014
Aw thanks so much glad you liked it!
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:iconblacknovawolf:
BlackNovaWolf Featured By Owner Jul 6, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
You're welcome ^^ and all of your fan fics are amazing BTW :)
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:iconcrazzzychic:
crazzzychic Featured By Owner Jul 6, 2014
Aww thanks so much you just made my night :)
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:iconblacknovawolf:
BlackNovaWolf Featured By Owner Jul 6, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
You're welcome ^^
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StormClawAndTiger Featured By Owner Jun 23, 2014
All of the feel... they are dead...
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treiannecalne Featured By Owner Jun 14, 2014  Student Artist
why?!!!Lovely Shoujo (Shocked) [V3] 
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SakuraDrowned Featured By Owner Apr 3, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
DAH FEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEELSSSSSSSSSSSSS
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:iconsmunoz2254:
smunoz2254 Featured By Owner Apr 3, 2014
the feels
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:iconxxandybiersack:
XxAndybiersack Featured By Owner Mar 23, 2014  Student Writer
And you just killed my feels!
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:iconchaoticrainbow347:
chaoticrainbow347 Featured By Owner Mar 13, 2014   Artist
Tears of Joy 
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:iconfortheloveofchaos:
Fortheloveofchaos Featured By Owner Jan 18, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
PART TWO TO RESTORE HUMANITY *clicks with every ounce of muscle I have left*
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:iconnekokitty35:
nekokitty35 Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
:iconcryingplz:
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:iconmarshallismyking:
Marshallismyking Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2014
It's so sad. Great job on the story. :)
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:iconfrancykirkland:
FrancyKirkland Featured By Owner Dec 22, 2013  Student General Artist
I'm gonna cry
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:iconotakulover2020:
OtakuLover2020 Featured By Owner Dec 15, 2013  Student Writer
I actually cried!!!!
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xofandompridexo Featured By Owner Nov 18, 2013
:( :( the feels!!!!
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DarkDareDemon Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2013
:iconsadplz: :iconcryforeverplz: :iconcryingplz: :iconthefeelsplz:
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Gamzeesxbimbox Featured By Owner Oct 29, 2013
Why you make it so sad :,( im crying
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Pepsimax1234 Featured By Owner Sep 20, 2013

Me: The feels

Friend 1: -crying-

Friend 2: why are you crying

Friend 1: why are you sad

Friend 3: this is as sad as the Russia x dying reader I read, he's already lonely

Friend 4: meh, -shrugs- it was alright I guess

me/Friend 1: emotionless monster

 

nothing makes her sad she has a black hole were her heart should be. great story by the way

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crazzzychic Featured By Owner Sep 26, 2013
aw thanks so much :)
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Vegveghowrse Featured By Owner Aug 28, 2013  Student Filmographer
wdjkefk T~T so sad
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:icongeekie-mari:
Geekie-Mari Featured By Owner Aug 21, 2013
Fappy Cry god ducking damn it thats sad
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:iconhottygirl101:
hottygirl101 Featured By Owner Aug 7, 2013  Student General Artist
Stupid embilicul cord thingy...
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:iconpandaluve:
pandaluve Featured By Owner Aug 5, 2013
This actually made me cry Tears of Joy Wahh!!!!
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japanxcanadaforever Featured By Owner Jul 20, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
So sad! Uwah! DX *cries over the loss of my child*
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:iconcrazzzychic:
crazzzychic Featured By Owner Jul 20, 2013
Well it got better for reader in part 2 lol
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:iconjapanxcanadaforever:
japanxcanadaforever Featured By Owner Jul 20, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Yup! I read it! Bittersweet and that line with mother Spain, I burst out laughing while my parents were like, dafuq's wrong with you?! Cute icon by the way! I love pikachu!
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:iconcrazzzychic:
crazzzychic Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2013
Glad you liked it XD thanks
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:iconjapanxcanadaforever:
japanxcanadaforever Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I did'nt like it, I loved it!
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Little-Liska Featured By Owner Jul 5, 2013
Totally didn't mean to put a wink face. O-o)
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:iconlittle-liska:
Little-Liska Featured By Owner Jul 5, 2013
It's beautiful but sad. Which makes it even more beautiful. You genius. I'm full of emotion right now. ;~;)
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:iconcrazzzychic:
crazzzychic Featured By Owner Jul 5, 2013
Lol it's fine and aww thanks glad you liked it
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MistDream454 Featured By Owner Jun 19, 2013
The feels *o*
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I-Ate-The-Rainbow Featured By Owner Jun 16, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
The whole Hetalia Fandom needs a part two, as soon as possible. Lord, my heart is torn.
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:iconcrazzzychic:
crazzzychic Featured By Owner Jun 20, 2013
[link] I finally got it posted :D
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:iconcrazzzychic:
crazzzychic Featured By Owner Jun 16, 2013
I'll get to it asap hopefully I'll have time tomorrow lol
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animewhofan001 Featured By Owner Jun 15, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
This. This happened to my cousin a few years ago.......
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:iconcrazzzychic:
crazzzychic Featured By Owner Jun 16, 2013
O.o I'm sorry
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chestercatisawesome Featured By Owner Jun 15, 2013  Student General Artist
You made me cry :'( right now it's like 2:00 am right now :nuu:
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