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Hetalia Axis Power Spain by leadervance by crazzzychic


"Hey amigos (friends)!" Spain called waking both you and your twin brother, Romano, up.
"What-a do you want you tomato loving bas-" Romano started to yell before Spain cut him off.
"It snowed!" Spain said excitedly as you looked at him like he was crazy from where you sat on the couch.
"What-a are you talking about?" you grumbled since you weren't very happy he had woken you up from your nap.
Spain, or Toni as you called him when you weren't in a bad mood, sighed impatiently before he laced his hand in yours and pulled you up off the couch. You looked at him like he was crazy, but deep down inside you were curious as to what he had to show you. You were a tough cookie to crack sometimes; being Romano's twin made you want to act like him, always grumpy or fussing, but really once you got underneath all of that coldness, you found a really sweet, caring girl, much like her younger brother, Italy. You were so caught up in wondering about yourself you didn't realize Spain had led you outside until you found yourself being hit by a snowball.
"What-a was that?!" You yelled startled.
"A snowball," Toni answered smirking. "We're having a snowball fight amiga!"
"And when did I agree to-a that?" you said crossing your arms as you began to shiver since you didn't have a coat on.
"When you yelled at me," he replied still grinning. "Now go get dressed so you don't get sick."
"You're not my madre (mother), why-a should I listen to you?" you asked being stubborn.
"Because-a I said to!" Romano grumbled appearing beside you. "What the heck is-a this?" Romano asked as he walked outside.
You rolled your eyes and left your twin and Spain as you went to find a jacket. Realizing you didn't have one in your room you slipped into Spain's to see if he had anything you could borrow. You went through his closet and slipped on a red hoodie that was hanging up. You were about to walk out when a card laying on his desk caught your eyes and you found yourself picking it up. Your mouth fell wide open when you realized it was a love note from Toni to someone else.

"Hola mi amiga! (Hello my friend!) 
...I didn't know how to tell you this in person so I thought I'd write you a note... but now I feel more confused then I started especially since I doubt you feel the same... but here goes nothing... Te amo (I love you)."

"What-a is this?!" you said almost yelling and surprising yourself.
How could Toni do this to me? Sure we aren't together, but why would he like a human girl that would just end up dying and hurting him? Wait-- am I jealous that he likes someone else? You thought to youself for a moment, before you realized, yes you were in fact crazy for that Spaniard who apparently loved someone else, which only made you mad and jealous.
"Amiga (female friend)! Where are you?" Toni's voice called from down the hall.
You found yourself still frozen in the middle of his room clenching the note. It wasn't that you didn't want him to be happy... you just didn't want him to get hurt like you knew those stupid human girls would. They wouldn't understand him at all, and then they would hurt him by dying and it would just be one big giant mess. You were so absorbed in your thoughts you didn't realize Toni had walked in his room and saw you with the note until it was too late.
"I-a w-was borrowing a jacket!" you stammered trying to set the note back down as he gasp and turned paler then normal.
"How much did you read?" Toni asked and you looked at the floor both embarrassed you got caught and embarrassed you were jealous.
"All of it... I thought you would-a be smarter then to fall for a human," you murmured lowly, but he still heard you and he tilted his head in confusion.
"Huh? A human? Amiga (female friend) I wrote that for you," Toni said walking to you and stopping in front of you.
"A-ha! I knew-a you liked a hu- wait... did you-a just say this was for me?" You asked snapping your head up and looking at him embarrassed as he nodded.
"Si (yes), what can I say?" He asked grinning like an idiot. "You're adorable, even when you're mad at me for being an idiot... but I know you wouldn't ever like me so-"
"B-bésame (kiss me)," you said interrupting him as you remembered your Spanish lessons from the past, remembering how both you and your twin brother only remembered that after the first lesson.
"W-what?" Toni said shocked.
"Bésame (kiss me)," you said looking into his green eyes and smiling.
"You remember what that means right?" Toni asked unsure and you nodded still grinning as he looked at you for a moment before finally leaning down and pressing his lips against yours.
You didn't hold back, as soon as he kissed you, you wrapped your arms around his neck and kissed him back as you both tried to ignore your growing blushes.
"WHAT-A IS GOING ON HERE?!" Romano yelled as he walked into the room and dropped whatever was in his hands as you and Spain separated.
"What-a did it look like you idiota (idiot)?" You yelled giving him a dirty look.
"Are you-a dating the tomato loving bas-" Romano asked in shock before you cut him off.
"SI!" You answered crossing your arms defiantly. "And-a don't call him that or else." you said giving your brother a dirty look before he hit the floor from shock.
"Did you mean that amiga (female friend)?" Toni asked in complete shock.
"Mean-a what?" You asked looking at him confused.
"That you'll be my girlfriend," he said making you grin and nod before you pulled him close and gave him another soft kiss.
"Te amo idiota (I love you idiot)," you said smirking as you pulled apart.
"Te amo _________________ (I love you ___________)," Toni said smiling.
Sure, this wasn't how you had planned to spend your day, but you were pleased with the out come, though you didn't know how pleasing Romano was going to be when he woke up... you had a feeling it was going to involve more yelling, but you were his twin, so you could handle him easily. The only thing you had to really worry about was how Toni was going to take your revenge for hitting you with a  snowball earlier, you thought grinning as you dragged your new Spanish boyfriend outside now eager to go play in the snow, and eager to deal with Romano whenever he woke up from his shock.
Well here is another request I got a long time ago o.o I hope you all like it, and the person who requested it, if you don't like it just message me and I can fix it! I do not own you or the Hetalia characters!
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:icongoddesskid:
goddesskid Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2015  New member
So basically, I'm a tsundere...
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heartofthewarrior13 Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2015  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Yeah see? Here it is
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:iconcrazzzychic:
crazzzychic Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2015
Oh hmm I completely forgot about this one XDD oops
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heartofthewarrior13 Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2015  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Yeah lol I'm like I've seen the story before
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:iconcrazzzychic:
crazzzychic Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2015
Well at least in the other one you were his little sister instead of his twin XD and the plots were diff :)
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:iconheartofthewarrior13:
heartofthewarrior13 Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2015  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
True true
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:icontheotakugurl:
theotakugurl Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2014  Student General Artist
"GREAT JOB ROMANO FOR RUINING THE MOMENT!!!!" *punches Romano in the face* A-Anyway... Great Fan Fic writer-chan! :D
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megan624 Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
My brother told me for like 2 years that I have 2 curls on my left side and also the right side (which is true, cause my mom also have this massive curls on her left and right side so, you know why.....). Whenever I fix my hair into a ponytail, this curls always comes out, out of nowhere and looks like romano's or italy's or even canada's curl! Is my curl, the um.... stupidest thing ever or just some non important things? Are you gonna agree with me or not?

*back to reality~*

Oh! Btw, sorry for this long non sense comment! Sorry it um... just slipped I guess? So, this story have a butt load of awesomeness or even cuteness? I don't know! So, great job!
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amliajane12345 Featured By Owner Dec 4, 2014  Student Writer
*Runs around squealing*
I look a lot like Fem!Romano because I have dark brown hair and brownish eyes (although mine have a greenish colour to them)
and I swear a lot, but I'm not Italian
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:iconmrs-soul-eater:
Dude, same for me exept I have dark brown eyes (I also have lightly tanned skin :P) . Also I act like Roma when i'm mad...Heh
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:iconfemdenmark92:
Femdenmark92 Featured By Owner Nov 29, 2014
Im definitely fem romano (even though my user name is fem denmark) lol
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SevrinDarkthorn Featured By Owner Nov 7, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
My friend calls me Romano, And I'm italian... And I have brownish eyes...And dark brown hair... Dammit, I'm the female version of Romano, Living in the scone bastard's country!! 
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:iconthecrazytardis5:
Thecrazytardis5 Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
Me two but I live in BURGER LAND!
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:iconcandieqq:
candieqq Featured By Owner Edited Nov 6, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
People say I act and look like Japan most of the time, but when I'm with my bestest friends, I act like frickin Romano x10
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:iconmichelle4288:
Michelle4288 Featured By Owner Oct 13, 2014
Does that make me fem Romano?
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:iconcrazzzychic:
crazzzychic Featured By Owner Oct 14, 2014
Yep ^w^
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:iconmichelle4288:
Michelle4288 Featured By Owner Oct 14, 2014
Cool!
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:iconrosemayliegottschalk:
RoseMaylieGottschalk Featured By Owner Sep 19, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Lol tomato bastard
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black-mockingjay Featured By Owner Sep 16, 2014  Student Writer
Whats really creepy, is that I have dusty brown/red/blue eyes, like Romano and I'm from Australia! But I have an American accent so people make fun of me for that, anyways love the story!
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Michelle4288 Featured By Owner Oct 13, 2014
Then they can suck it because 'Murica!
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:iconihavetoomanyocs123:
IhavetoomanyOCs123 Featured By Owner Feb 25, 2015  Student General Artist
Suck it loozhers!
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:iconblack-mockingjay:
black-mockingjay Featured By Owner Oct 13, 2014  Student Writer
Lol
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:iconasianturnip:
asianturnip Featured By Owner Aug 30, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
it's so cute!!! I really wish i were italian right now
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:iconlolopuppy:
Lolopuppy Featured By Owner Sep 7, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
We are really loud though............
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:iconasianturnip:
asianturnip Featured By Owner Sep 9, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Mnot a problem!!! My family's loud anyway, despite my parent not there
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DragoShadowing Featured By Owner Aug 19, 2014  Student Writer
Really, Alex? You just had to tell him to kiss you? Da fuq wrong wich you?

(I am talking to myself for clarification)
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YellowVixen Featured By Owner Aug 5, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
wait, i'm blonde so...... hahah, i must be twins with 2p romano!
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:iconasianturnip:
asianturnip Featured By Owner Aug 30, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
I don't think it has to be Identical... besides, there is no such thing as logic in either anime, or fanfiction
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:iconyellowvixen:
YellowVixen Featured By Owner Aug 31, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
i know, but hey! i wouldn't mind going 'round killing people with a twin bro~ :D
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:iconasianturnip:
asianturnip Featured By Owner Sep 1, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
i WISH i could go around killing people with a twin
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dancechamp520 Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
same!
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hetalianminecrafter Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
.//giggles//

Author, you have totally captivated my personality in this one reader insert.
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SunnySunshine203 Featured By Owner Jul 12, 2014  Student Digital Artist
I don't look like Romano .... But deep inside ... I'm him 
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Tammydy Featured By Owner Aug 10, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
True dat sista
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iluv2camp99 Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2014  Hobbyist Filmographer
You don't realize how much I love this comment.
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bubbleonfire Featured By Owner Jul 9, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
All I could think after Romano passed out was "Yeah guys, just leave him on the floor. He'll be fine."
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:iconkiasun:
kiasun Featured By Owner Jun 4, 2014
"Ur adorable when ur...." is my daily phrase! I cant believe toi used my phrase! Yeeeeeey
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Smiledogjpeg Featured By Owner May 27, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Ironically enough, I look like Romano, in female form. I act like him too, just calmer until someone pisses me off, which is pretty easy. I think i'm a lot smarter too. ^_^
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kck13 Featured By Owner Jul 19, 2014
I'm the same way
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Smiledogjpeg Featured By Owner Jul 22, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
yeah!*hi five*
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CristalJordan Featured By Owner Apr 25, 2014  Student Writer
Omg roma blacked out yea I did it now to lock toni up somewhere and keep him from the world hi is mine//shot I love it
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treiannecalne Featured By Owner Apr 17, 2014  Student Artist
oh the fluffiness [supertighthugpls]
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ReinaKitty274 Featured By Owner Apr 12, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
It's very cute! I hope I'm not asking too much, but can you make an England x Reader?
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crazzzychic Featured By Owner Jun 30, 2014
No you're not asking too much :) I was just sitting down to make a new list of stories I have to get done lol message me the details and since I can't find my list next time I sit to write a request I'll make sure to do yours (sorry I'm just responding just now got back on)
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ReinaKitty274 Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Lol. Sorry, for not replying in... about a month? As for the reader insert, I'm not really picky about how it turns out. "Surprise me," as some would put it.
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Portugal22 Featured By Owner Apr 10, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Fluffy!!!
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TheAmazingBookWorm Featured By Owner Mar 21, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Could you do a Norway  x reader?
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kittykatrocks12 Featured By Owner Mar 18, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
:iconheartrollplz: This is so Cute
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Faustita Featured By Owner Mar 3, 2014
omfgg so cutee!!! <3 Bro hug 
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elephantgirl202 Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2014
:iconbwavoplz: so good!!!!!!
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